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Sound is nice.

As in, if you want to submit this to Newgrounds, then I recommend at least adding a little sound to it.

Also, it was very short for an animation.

Looks OK, but...

This specifically should probably have been uploaded to the NG Alphas section.

I can't decide on a rating, so...

I'm only going to leave a review.

The 3-D environments looked cool, but the flash drawing could have used either more work, or consistency. I understand everyone probably had established avatars, but usually, a flash looks better when everyone is animated at least roughly similar. tracener and xtrackterx's characters don't have to look identical, but the same effort should probably go into each of them.

The sound quality (for the short time there was sound) was a little poor, and again, I don't think that was your fault, because, as you said in the description, it was initially a collab. The others probably provided their own audio. When there was no speech, I could understand why, as well.

It's always awesome to see an AYBABTU reference.

I give you a 7, which I only chose because I had to in order to submit. I don't believe this is necessarily representative of your work, and encourage you to improve the next flash in this series. Speech, for one, is always preferred over text, from what I've seen and experienced.

I think that's all the advice I can give.

Sorry if I got kinda wordy.

Interesting

Training Julia at the Gym results in a foreign message, Russian, I would guess. No other combination results in this sort of message.

The interface is a little unclear, and the help button isn't much help. When you choose what to do right after training the girls, the eye naturally falls on the large option box in the lower middle part of the screen, so the option of looking at the map presented in the upper right corner is not obvious. Also, an option should be provided in case you click an option accidentally, so that you can go back and choose a different option.

And is it just me, or is it odd that when you give Julia her second gift, you actually fuck her, whereas the other two and the doctor just give you a blowjob?

Also, I think that it is too easy to just let the game pick out the right item from your inventory when you are presenting a gift to one of the girls. It would add a certain degree of difficulty to force the player to remember which girl wants which gift, and when.

Some dialog options should probably also force an immediate end to dialog. Most of the ones where the player tries to jump right to sex, for example.

Whew!

Finally broke 1 million.

On that note, at the end of the song, the score at the top displays correctly, but the one that pops up on the screen after the song only shows the highest six digits (actual: 1022512, other one shows 102251). Probably a problem with a TextField's width.

For anyone doubting that score, since the Armor Games leaderboards are down, it was "I Will Defy", 979/1003 notes (97%). If the leaderboards ever come back, I'm Lord Io, my last high score should still be in the first 30 or so (same song, just shy of a million). Also screenshot.

And hey, Semi, will we ever see a sequel? Or more songs?

Some work still needed

Blue's field player teleports back to his starting position every time he touches the ball, it seems.

Also, it's rather difficult to get the ball past blue's goalie, but maybe that's because I'm used to easier games.

I got 2 goals to their zero, so...

Also, the name, "Two-Player Soccer," seems to suggest that two players can play, when it doesn't look like they can.

Impressive

My only real criticisms are that the suddenly loud phrases in the first minute or so can get distracting, which is easily fixed by quieting them just a little; and that the song seems to end rather abruptly. I don't know how to go about fixing that, but if a listener thinks it ended too soon, that's a good sign, right?

Overall, an enjoyable piano piece.

Question: How did you record this? Did you play the piece yourself, or did you use a program to compose it?

Powerful song.

Your talent knows no bounds, hania. This even brought me, a spiteful, cynical, all-around typical American teen, to the brink of tears. Your ability to elicit emotion is impeccable.

Never stop being so awesome, and congratulations on your marriage.

Blessed be thee and thy union.

You have made yourself yet another fan.

I do somewhat agree with other reviewers that this doesn't sound goth. It has a bit of that sound to it, but seems more classical or similar.

It may be described as emo, since it's about suicide, but emo is such an overused word that it means nothing anymore.

Two thumbs up. 10/10, 5/5. Favorited. I can bestow no higher honor on such a great artist.